One day I woke up thirsty for griches so I went into my shed full of riches and thought "what will I mine for today? Gems?No. I got it...Gold!  I ran to my room and put my hiking gear on. Then my mom to drove me to the mountains . It was a long trip but we made it there. Then we started to dig. On my 3rd bang the ground below me started to crack. Next thing you know I was in a very bright cave. The light was so bright that I was almost blinded then I saw a white flying thing and I asked myself "am I in heaven?" a very sweet voice said "NO, this is Angelheaven. Where all is good. When the angel heard my mother she flew me back up to the top of the mountain. The my mother saw I was fine and drove me back home.

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    I am Asha, and I am  a 4th grade writer in Mrs.Vilas'

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    June 2013
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